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boogieblack 2011-07-02 04:05

NEW TRACK completed- "Spirit of Dolor" listen and give feedback please
 
Just completed this track last night.. This track is for anyone that has experienced heartache recently. It has a real melancholic feel to it. Have a listen and as usual, constructive feedback is always requested..

S.N- Piano is inspired by Jamie Foxx's song "Extravaganza"

http://soundcloud.com/jfkbeatz/spiri...r-prod-by-just

SoulElemental 2011-07-02 06:45

I like the track you pu together a lot. If I could, i would fatten up the kicks and alter the snare. Maybe decorate the piano by adding deeper notes, all in all I like it!!! great work!

boogieblack 2011-07-02 15:15

i appreciate the listen.. I'm still learning a lot as I go

Staarchylld 2011-07-03 09:24

again more improvement. The kicks do sound kind of funny almost like you arent playing the full sample.Try playing with panning some of the tracks left or right.

boogieblack 2011-07-04 04:58

thanks for the insight. I'll go have another listen

SoulElemental 2011-07-04 05:02

If u have any questions, feel free to hit almost any of us up. We are all learning too. We may be able to help with crazy shit hahahaha (just the crazy shit, not much else loool)

boogieblack 2011-07-04 12:34

Lol.. I hear you on that

ghostriderlx 2011-07-04 16:50

Nice work but I agree with the piano , lower your notes some so it doesn't sound too much of the same thing over and over .
The drum track I thought was a bit too loud , maybe lower that a bit too . Overall its a good song !

Ghostriderxl

Danoc 2011-07-05 03:11

Quote:

Originally Posted by boogieblack (Post 879322)
Just completed this track last night.. This track is for anyone that has experienced heartache recently. It has a real melancholic feel to it. Have a listen and as usual, constructive feedback is always requested..

S.N- Piano is inspired by Jamie Foxx's song "Extravaganza"

http://soundcloud.com/jfkbeatz/spiri...r-prod-by-just

Good work bro

boogieblack 2011-07-19 05:35

Appreciate the listen and input, thanks. When you refer to the drums, do you mean the kick or the snare or both?


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