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jayrod 2012-02-25 22:05

1 pop beat, 1 hip hop song
 
whats up p-head folk. just looking for some listens & opinions on my latest beat (the 1's). its an uptempo pop beat but i have a hip hop concept (as far as lyrics go) for it. the drums are simple & its full of synth sounds. the hip hop song (i'm from) is an extra for your ears. i did this song a while back but went back & remixed it last week. you can go to my reverbnation page if you wanna read the lyrics to it while you listen. well let me know what you music lovers think...

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SoulElemental 2012-02-25 23:15

Great work on both these joints Jay. That break down in "the-1's is waaaaay cool man.

jayrod 2012-02-26 03:39

i appreciate that guy

EricBom 2012-02-26 10:39

Yeah sounds good bro!

jayrod 2012-02-26 22:20

thanx very much guy. i appreciate the listen.

Staarchylld 2012-02-26 23:14

definitely like where im from although I think the hook needs some work

jayrod 2012-02-26 23:39

Quote:

Originally Posted by Staarchylld (Post 1006577)
definitely like where im from although I think the hook needs some work

thanx guy. what exactly do you mean by the hook needs some work? do you mean the fx on the vocals or the clarity of it, or the mix on the hook?

Staarchylld 2012-02-27 00:19

compared to the vocals in the verse the voice sounds weak, almost like you were embarassed to do the hook. it didnt sound confident.

jayrod 2012-02-27 03:36

Quote:

Originally Posted by Staarchylld (Post 1006598)
compared to the vocals in the verse the voice sounds weak, almost like you were embarassed to do the hook. it didnt sound confident.

LOL, gotcha guy. thats probably because i went back & recorded the verses & not the hook. i did make the verses more aggressive. guess i'll have to redo that hook. good looking out


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