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liamdinsmore 2013-01-18 06:43

Behind All The Green
 
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Just wrote this one, I would love some feedback on it - any feedback welcome! :)

Thanks for listening,

Liam

raymondh 2013-01-19 11:26

Hi Liam

My personal opinion:
- I like your vocals - you have a great voice.
- I like the guitar work - nice sound and nicely played.
- I don't like the piano - It's possibly the recording, but for me, it's not fitting into the mix well in this track. I think your mixing is better in your other tracks.

I'm "following" you now - I am interested to see where you go with your music. While your music is more acoustically oriented (so to speak), I'd be keen to hear some electric piano, and/or maybe some electronic strings/pads for subtle harmony or something. Certainly great potential - look forward to hearing more!

cheers
Raymond

liamdinsmore 2013-01-21 20:01

Thank you for your honest feedback! May I ask out of curiosity what you listened on? I mixed this on headphones and liked it but I never got to listen on anything else yet!

Thanks

Benedict 2013-01-22 11:21

Hi

Maybe that is why the sense of space seems odd in this. I am feeling the voice is far too sparse and the piano sounds like it comes from another place (oh geez that guitar sounds like it owes some to Dave Gilmour).

Not really my thing (only because it doesn't grab me) but there is an audience for this when you get it balanced up right.

:)

moofi 2013-01-22 14:33

The piano could be more upfront. Otherwise I like the song.

liamdinsmore 2013-01-23 02:34

Okay thanks, I listened to the song in a few other locations. To be honest I wanted a distant, crappy sounding piano that is what I was going for...maybe eq'ing it and giving it a bit more space in the mix would help...thanks for the feedback!

pastoreric 2013-01-23 05:59

Quote:

Originally Posted by liamdinsmore (Post 1224583)
Okay thanks, I listened to the song in a few other locations. To be honest I wanted a distant, crappy sounding piano that is what I was going for...maybe eq'ing it and giving it a bit more space in the mix would help...thanks for the feedback!

Listen! This is a great piece, I REALLY like it! If you found a way to slightly tame the piano a bit, it would be even more fantastic. But even if you didn't, I still enjoy it! Actually, I personally like things that are a little odd in compositions. Sometimes we become way too technical instead of going with what just feels good!

bgranger 2013-01-23 20:02

Piano needs to be more aggressive sounding, like you can hear the hammers hitting, get that nice and placed in the right spot, at the moment sounds not there, vocals sound cool.

Cheers

B

billymcbride 2013-01-24 13:00

I found your song mysterious and I enjoyed how everything tied together.

NMRosta 2013-01-24 13:31

Ah this one is nice!


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