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alternating.bit 2013-01-23 23:24

My new song "Crime Scene"
 
See what you think...


Mate 2013-01-23 23:34

Awesome song, sounds pro!

Respect!

JoshuaPhilgarlic 2013-01-23 23:45

OMG, this song rocks :eek: !!!

The voice could be a bit more prominent, but I like it really, really, really :D !

bornsticky 2013-01-24 00:30

Nice track :)

djresonator 2013-01-24 00:32

Nice work! I love the retro '80s style and the use of the Polysix. :)

alternating.bit 2013-01-24 12:36

Thanks so much folks! It's encouraging words like these that inspire me to keep writing (:

moogybase 2013-01-24 12:57

This is pretty good - best song of yours i've heard - but I don't like that synth sound that comes in at 31 secs - you need a sound with more character / harmonics here - that just sounds like a nasty harsh naked synth wave - too unmusical for me!

The burbling bass is nice - Viking?

Also - vary the drums a bit more - a few fills, builds, variations etc. to hold interest - details are important!

alternating.bit 2013-01-24 13:02

Quote:

Originally Posted by moogybase (Post 1225469)
This is pretty good - best song of yours i've heard - but I don't like that synth sound that comes in at 31 secs - you need a sound with more character / harmonics here - that just sounds like a nasty harsh naked synth wave - too unmusical for me!

The burbling bass is nice - Viking?

Also - vary the drums a bit more - a few fills, builds, variations etc. to hold interest - details are important!

These are all very valid points actually. I do tend to get lazy with drums.
And I know exactly what you mean about that synth sound, it actually is the 3rd variation of it and though it does stand out by the rawness, I kind of like it that way... but you're right, nevertheless.
The bass is actually Korg Polysix... that disturbing raw sound is Viking :P
Thanks for listening.

dub08 2013-01-24 13:15

Hate to be "that guy" but...wrong forum. :)
If they let you do it, they have to let everyone do it. No bueno.

NMRosta 2013-01-24 13:28

I dig it!!!!!


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