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Old 2012-11-10, 16:18
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Nice vibes in this. Everything fits together nicely.

Just a couple of mix issues that could be improved....

The Kick feels too prominant, either that of the click of it is over accentuated.

Too much treble in the mix making it sound too brittle too.
The hats and bits of the drums become are too harsh and become fatiguing after a while.....The hats could even just be a little loud

The pad would also benefit from less top end.
A nice sweeeping LPF rolling it off and opening it in places could be just the ticket.

The piano is a touch dry too.
A subtle, filted delay (the echo ) and a nice reverb could sound nice here.

Sorry if that seems a harsh critique, but its just a couple of tweaks away from a great track!

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