hey ed, cool, didn't know this was up here and was just looking for a musical interlude.
i don't know what PsyTale means by shallow but i'm hearing focus on the bass and low end... not a bad thing at all. might be worthwhile to explore some extra presence on some of the mid-to-high insts, i.e. the panned keys in the intro that provide the main melodic focus before brent's 1st vocals come in. the bass and perc is where most of the energy is concentrated.
the current mix translates really well on my mono laptop speaker, no easy feat.
edit: p.s., off topic -- i'm curious to see how the new dropbox features will facilitate faster file sharing. looking fwd to the next flurry of activity.