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Old 2013-01-13, 08:51
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I only have two tips, the later of which I don't think needs saying.

1) I think the sweeping sound (that first plays at 0:19) is either too loud or (by default) too shrill. I'd play around with it some.

2) It needs a melody of some sort.

Despite these two things, I really liked it.

Do you plan to add vocals (or something)?

edit: Oh yeah. If by bass levels you mean the volume of the bass, I think it's fine. If it was a different genre (like classical, soft rock, etc.) I'd think it's too loud, but this hip-hopish sort of music is supposed to have kind of loud bass.