My personal opinion:
- I like your vocals - you have a great voice.
- I like the guitar work - nice sound and nicely played.
- I don't like the piano - It's possibly the recording, but for me, it's not fitting into the mix well in this track. I think your mixing is better in your other tracks.
I'm "following" you now - I am interested to see where you go with your music. While your music is more acoustically oriented (so to speak), I'd be keen to hear some electric piano, and/or maybe some electronic strings/pads for subtle harmony or something. Certainly great potential - look forward to hearing more!