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Old 2013-01-21, 23:38
Superheefer Superheefer is offline
 
Join Date: May 2012
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Hey man I like the rhymes. The beats are good but I feel like they could use more hi hats or ride. I know you probably left them out on purpose to give ur songs a more raw sound, but I always love hearing the rhythm of the hats and the rhymes line up. Nas for example is great at this. You have great timing being able to stay tight without hats and I think a good hat rhythm would only bring it out even more.

What I think would be cool is if you left the intros and chorus' without hats or ride and bring them in for the verses to bring out the rhythm of your rhymes. That way you will have a nice contrast between raw beats and tight rhythms.

This is just my opinion lol, some people might disagree but I think those couple things will really bring out your skills and draw people into the songs even more.