Thanks for the feedback.
I was just kind of jamming on the vocals and that's what came out, sort of half committed syllables.
For the kick, I was wondering if you had any advice on bringing it out more? I doubled the kick and set up a side chain submix through a mixer and sent it to the keys of most rhythm tracks. I boosted the lows at 80hz and the attack higher up around 2-4khz. Maybe it was the sample I was using for the kick itself, which was a standard disco kick from Reason's stock Redrum sounds.