I'm new at this so don't rip me apart. I'm working on my first song (link provided). I've put it on SoundCloud, and I have purposely cut the song down into 4-8 bar blocks. I understand if it's cliche, but I want all feedback (positive and negative), and I'd like people to tell what they like and dislike (and why). I plan to manipulate all the "blocks" of the song to enhance the flow and development of the song. It has a terrible cutoff for a drop and the song ends without notice.
I'm not attached to the patches I've chosen, but I picked each patch/sound to illustrate the musical role I'd like them to play.