I think it's a bit too busy, for me.
You have a nice melody line in there that gets a bit lost.
If you don't want to drop out any parts, I'd suggest more orchestration of when parts start and stop, or, harsh use of EQ.
I liked the choice of drum sounds and the drum programming.
And overall, it has the warm sound of Bitley's patches, which I really like.
good stuff - look forward to hearing more!