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Old 2013-02-25, 19:54
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Thumbs down Work on that chordprogression.

Originally Posted by techdm View Post
This is my most recent track. It's slower than my last one, simple but with some nice chords

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Listen its a hot mess mate, you need to look into chord progressions. This isn't working. Theres no build-up and it seems like its on the same plain all the time. Also your repeating the process until the end, try and make it work a little more, think about 4 chords and abuse them to the max. Once you worked that out start thinking about adding chords.
Play some instrument, like a guitar to get feeling with what can and cant be done.

Dissonance is the onces bliss and the others enemy, to me this is just too much incoherence.