Originally Posted by techdm
This is my most recent track. It's slower than my last one, simple but with some nice chords
Listen its a hot mess mate, you need to look into chord progressions. This isn't working. Theres no build-up and it seems like its on the same plain all the time. Also your repeating the process until the end, try and make it work a little more, think about 4 chords and abuse them to the max. Once you worked that out start thinking about adding chords.
Play some instrument, like a guitar to get feeling with what can and cant be done.
Dissonance is the onces bliss and the others enemy, to me this is just too much incoherence.