Nice work! Although it's suppose to sound like the 80's I would add more pump to it to make it a little more interesting and up to date. It sounds a little flat as it is right now. I agree with the "woa woa" at 2:08, more volume there.
Regarding the mixing, it is suffering from the same issues I deal with in my own productions which is a little too much going on in the highs. Try some narrow cuts somewhere at 9kHz and 12khz on your hats and other bright percussion.
Great vocals btw!