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Old 2013-04-12, 13:27
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Hi Matthew

It has a lot of potential.

I really like all the instrumentation and the composition, except for me I think there's too much of that vocal lead sound. It sounds nice, but I reckon it would be interesting to hear the track split into two or three parts (call them verse, chorus etc) with the nice vocal hook being in one part, and then some other melody or musical interest in another part, to change things up a bit.

I'd be keen to hear what else you can do with this musical theme - it is very good.

cheers
Raymond