Compere the two. Skrillex has a lot more spikes in the drop, making the drums more dynamic and easier to bang your head to. The OP's song has almost no dynamics at the drop. I'm not saying the Soundcloud image has to be super jagged and it has to look like a child scribbled it out with an orange marker, but I feel like the OP just maxed out the compression and maxed out the volume, making it kind of hard to dance to.
And let's be honest, Kyoto probably isn't the best example out there. Just my opinion.