Me as a breaks (among other styles) listener says:
Not bad, although it's not really my style. Also it's a little bland, it's just the beat and the bass and not much else. No squeaks or jabs or anything. So it gets a little boring after a minute or so. Try adding some drum edits.
Also, what's with the fade-in at the beginnen? That has to go.
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