Here's the latest. I can't quite churn them out like some of you guys, but I'm trying to keep up.
I think this song's biggest failing might be that it sounds too much like my previous track. Maybe I'm working through something. Also, it feels a bit "simple." Not necessarily repetative, but fairly simplistic. That may or may not be a bad thing.
I've got another new one that I think is better, but it still needs some work before it's ready to be shared.
As before, comments and suggestions are greatly appreciated. I got some really great feedback last time and it was very helpful. More of the same, if any of you can spare the time, would be terrific! Be honest... I think I can take it!
Untitled - June 26, 2004