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Old 2005-03-13, 23:27
amasseng amasseng is offline
 
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First House track on Soundclick need some critiques

What's up y'all,
I just finished my first house track that is anywhere near descent. I have been attempting to make house and trance music for a while now but I have been having trouble figuring out the layering of the sounds and actually getting those wonderful sounding synths that I want, namely in trance.
Anyway I just finished Intergalactic Rocket Ship, and it came out in my ear much better than previous attempts, the only one I have built up enough confidence in to post here. I normally make dark downtempo type music but like I said, been attempting these uptempo type dance beats for a little bit.
Basically, I need some critiques. I'm not so sure about the pad I chose in the second breakdown, I was just trying by this point to fill up the empty air, and second it seems like it needs some sort of synth overlay like appregio or some type of lead to give the song that extra something.
But anyway let me know what you think could make it better and if you hate let me know, cause that helps to.
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