I think it definitely sounds on the right track. It has that classic trance pluck down pat. My only critique or observation is the low end. I listened with headphones and I was getting a lot of low end rumble. I'm thinking the overall sound is very powerful, and a lot of eqing would be required to get this to sit well in the mix.
Just my 2 cents though... I'm definitely curious about some extra opinions on this one.