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Old 2012-11-30, 17:44
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Smile Famous Last Words

Hi,
Please listen to my new song if you have a few minutes and give me some feedback :-). The vocal levels are not brilliant imho, but a second opinion would be great. Its called 'Famous Last Words' and here it is:

http://sunshinesatellite.bandcamp.co...ous-last-words

Thanks,
Tom
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Old 2012-11-30, 20:00
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those vocals are lacking presence.

The sound like a background pad.


Everything else seems great.
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Old 2012-11-30, 20:25
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Sounds good apart from the vox!

Have you tried lowering the rest of the mix to compensate? Maybe add a very small amount of distortion to make it a little 'grittier'. Try Pulveriser!
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Old 2012-11-30, 20:45
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Why dirty the voice when everything else is ... nursery rhyme clean?
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Old 2012-11-30, 23:21
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I dunno, it just sounds like it needs it to my ears. Different perspectives.... Nursery Rhyme clean; and there you have it! Needs something contrasting, maybe with the voice?
Anyroad, I wasn't talking about mashed up distortion, just something light to bring it up a bit in the mix, I use it a lot for vox.

Just advice, take it or leave it
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Old 2012-12-01, 00:10
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What if I do both... take it and leave it...
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