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Old 2013-04-21, 02:52
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New Song! Would like feedback...

This is my latest work. It has an underground Hiphop vibe but it's really original. I express my how I feel and my views (the world events and religious influence in the tragedies) and such. Just venting basically. I recorded in Reason 6. Also If anyone has any good tips on mixing rap vocals - I'd appreciate it.

Here's the link to the youtube, which includes the lyrics:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9BGE_IWJgws

Here's the link to the soundcloud, which includes the download:
https://soundcloud.com/apollobeatz1/...its-made-up-to

Thank you! Btw this is my first post- So If I do anything wrong, I'm sorry.

- Aidan
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Old 2013-04-21, 03:05
DynamicDontPanic DynamicDontPanic is offline
 
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I don't like hip hop and disagree with the message of that song you made, but l think the poetry was just sublime, it was really well written! It captures the central mystery to not believing in life after death, the feeling of living in the "now".
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Old 2013-04-21, 03:45
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I'm glad you can still appreciate it in a way regardless of disagreeing. Thanks for the reply. I was in like a sad stage when I wrote this obviously. It was after the bombing In Boston and such. I kind of mentioned that in the song. Thanks for the reply though...

Peace
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Old 2013-04-22, 08:06
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I agree with Dynamic - well written - I had to replay a couple times.
 

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