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Old 2013-04-24, 04:35
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Cool The Naked Truth

Here's a new track I recently finished.
Criticism is welcome!


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Old 2013-04-24, 13:23
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nice. I liked the idea; particularly the bass. I liked the build up at the beginning - that was nicely arranged. There were a few things that I thought of which might enhance the track: There sounded as though there was a little bit of unwelcome distortion on the kick at the beginning. Also, I think the drums could have been thicker and bolder in the mix. A lot to do with my taste for drums but a little parallel processing and compression on those drums would be a treat. On those lines, I think a couple of drum breaks would have been welcome to work around the bass and perhaps a ride cymbal at the end to get the drama of the end of the track.

As for the guitar sounds, I really liked them but I think a little judicious reverb could have brought the whole track together as the instruments sound a little dry and don't seem to be occupying quite the same sound space.

Anyway, those are just a few of my thoughts but this is a very cool track. Nice one!
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Old 2013-04-25, 02:53
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Thanks! I'll play around with your suggestions and see if I can enhance it any.
 

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