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Old 2012-08-14, 14:08
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New Trance Track! Feedback?

Hey guys,

I haven't done one of these in a while, and I've NEVER done one with lyrics. I kinda fell out of the groove for the whole trance thing until I listened to some Omek a few weeks ago. So here it is, cut-and-dry, if you're so inclined, I'd like some feedback please!

Thanks for listening.

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Old 2012-08-14, 15:44
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I like it! Nice work on the vocals!
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Old 2012-08-14, 17:14
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This is a great Track Centron,,, for sure ,really like the Vocals & the Nice Big slow_rolling kinda TRANCE , May i suggest carmimng down the opening White noise , its just a wee little to loud / Observation not crit ! Peace out JamieP
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Old 2012-08-14, 18:28
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Thanks JamieP! The criticism/listen is always appreciated!
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Old 2012-08-15, 02:45
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Thanks JamieP ! The criticism/listen is always appreciated!
It wasnt Criticism Cetron , it was observation , I dont do crits , if i dont like a track , i just say nothing
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Old 2012-08-15, 02:49
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Bit techy, bit progressive, nice dark atmosphere you're going for here. Could have used a bit more rythmic elements to keep it rolling without sounding so clean-cut, but that's a personal preference.

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Old 2012-08-15, 04:03
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I missed the part

about slow. I was expecting to get blasted by some upbeat trance. I like it. It brought back memories of the Virgin records at the Sunset Five in LA seven or so years ago. They had a section dedicated to Dance and Electronica. This is the kind of song that would have been playing.
 

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