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Old 2012-11-09, 12:18
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made a pop punk song

Just wanted some critique/advice on my mix.
I was going for New Found Glory, The Wonder Years, The Story So Far type of pop punk feel.
Hope you like it!

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thanks!

-Dan
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Old 2012-11-09, 17:04
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Hum I use to say this to young rap dudes but here it's worst !
pay some attention : there is not and never will be any punk that will go pop ever ever ever ever ever !
(no Hate) that got nothing to do with your music it's just some basic stuff to know about punks
by the way I think the beat is very cool and you got talent 4 shure !
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Old 2012-11-09, 18:22
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Nice track Dan!
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Old 2012-11-09, 20:46
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Hum I use to say this to young rap dudes but here it's worst !
pay some attention : there is not and never will be any punk that will go pop ever ever ever ever ever !
(no Hate) that got nothing to do with your music it's just some basic stuff to know about punks
by the way I think the beat is very cool and you got talent 4 shure !
No, no, no, I totally agree! To be honest, I hate the the term "pop punk." lol but, it's a way for people to generally understand or narrow down a genre of music. Technically, I don't like to categorize any music. Good music is good music, am I right?
Anyway, I hope you liked that track. Thanks!

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Nice track Dan!
Hey coming from you, that means a lot! Thank you!
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Old 2012-11-09, 22:46
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Sounds great
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Old 2012-11-09, 23:23
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lol I was just playing , yes i like the track it's real music !
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Old 2012-11-09, 23:31
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very good stuff here, well done. Just a few thoughts since you asked.

Snare is a little boxy, and guitars are burying the overall drums some. Also I'd roll off low-end of all guitars so the bass comes out a little more.

And the vocals are WAY too quiet

great stuff though man!
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Old 2012-11-10, 03:41
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great stuff.... takes me back....
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Old 2012-11-10, 16:01
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I like the boxy snare. It really pops nicely in a few places.
 

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