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Old 2013-10-23, 11:46
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Need some help/ears

I'm working on this new track and I very much like the vibe.
But somehow it just seems there is something wrong.
Maybe a wrong key or maybe played a note wrong.
Maybe it's just frequencies clashing with each other.

And there is even a chance I'm going mad!

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Old 2013-10-23, 16:14
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Ok! Find the problem!

Was a double note on the bass!
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Old 2013-10-23, 16:15
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Hey Eric,

It sounds really nice. I have marked in the timeline of your wave file the keys that might be off and they reappear throughout the track. Try to find the right key for them of just get rid of it, cause everything else sounds great.
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Old 2013-10-23, 16:20
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Ah thanks!
Gonna check it out!

At least my double note is gone and now to listen again for your input!
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Old 2013-10-23, 16:22
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Do you mean the louder piano note?


Ah man I really need some basic music lessons!
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Old 2013-10-23, 17:31
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Do you mean the louder piano note?


Ah man I really need some basic music lessons!
Yes that one...it's a bit off, not entirely. Could be its tone. Try playing with it or just don't use it. The rest sounds great like I said.
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Old 2013-10-23, 17:37
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Fixed it Ed.
Also did adjust the faders a little and just a touch of overall sound adjustment.

Uploading version 2 as we speak...


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Old 2013-10-23, 17:39
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And thanks for the help Ed!
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Old 2013-10-23, 19:38
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And thanks for the help Ed!
You're welcome dude.
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Old 2013-10-24, 16:21
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First impression, Maybe check out the high piano

Sounds like half a step too high.
 

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