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Old 2013-11-16, 10:19
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Wow a few tracks uploaded so close together.. that's brave!!

I like the intro, the arpegio is nice... Again your rapping sounds ok, recording is clean. this track has more bass then the last. You definitely like your "gangsta" shit and you do it pretty good.

The reversed vocals are fun.

Where will you listen to this where people will take this seriously?? Maybe I'm too Canadian but this shit is total gangsta shit... I envision cars with hydraulics bouncing around, pumping this out of the speakers!

"Pussy stankin"?? did you seriously use that as a lyric?? (ok, gotta remember I'm here to critique the music and not the lyrics....)

Like the last track, I think your track is good but you need a bit more in production to put it over the top.. Perhaps change the percussion between the verse and chorus to make it more obvious and make the track evolve a little better.

Anyhoo, pretty good track
 

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