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Old 2011-02-11, 12:15
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New Dirty / Electro House tune. Feedback please.

Hi,
Just finished a House tune. Still fairly new to making music, just got reason in december.
Its a dirty / electro style tune called 'Motha Fucka', feedback will be much appreciated.

Thanks.

http://soundcloud.com/mark-tarran/motha-fucka
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Old 2011-02-11, 20:25
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Hi there,

Just had a listen and its a good house tune. The scratching works well with the vocal sample. I think if the song progressed a bit more as it goes on it would add more interest but its really good to say your fairly new to music making.

Cheers Simon
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Old 2011-02-12, 22:17
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Cheers for your feedback mate, i will work on this tune a bit more. I still have quite a lot to learn on Reason and do struggle a bit to make a decent sounding build up. Also still need some practise messing about with vocals.

Thanks again for your comments though.
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Old 2011-02-13, 08:54
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You're off to a good start. Keep making tracks!
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Old 2011-02-13, 14:09
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Cheers Goamek.
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Old 2011-02-13, 17:06
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Nice and dirty, I like it. Kinda has a glitch-house feel to it too, neat. As the others above have stated, excellent working with the scratching samples. But yeah, around 1:44 in some introduction of vocals would be hot and would definitely take the track to a whole other level.

That being said, getting into vocals can take a while, it's tough with Reason alone as well, if vocals are something you're keen on introducing I would highly recommend getting Record and playing with that as well.
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Old 2011-02-14, 20:06
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Yeah i have been thinking about getting Record, for vocals I'm only using a sample pack i brought off the net at the mo, so would be good to actually sample some stuff into my tracks.

Once again, thanks very much for the positive comment, good to know i'm heading in the right direction!

Cheers durn.
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Old 2011-02-16, 14:54
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Nice and Dirty Bass line
Keep it up!
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Old 2011-02-17, 17:51
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Cheers Pelios... i do like a bit of dirty bass
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Old 2011-02-17, 20:44
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