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Old 2011-07-02, 04:05
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Talking NEW TRACK completed- "Spirit of Dolor" listen and give feedback please

Just completed this track last night.. This track is for anyone that has experienced heartache recently. It has a real melancholic feel to it. Have a listen and as usual, constructive feedback is always requested..

S.N- Piano is inspired by Jamie Foxx's song "Extravaganza"

http://soundcloud.com/jfkbeatz/spiri...r-prod-by-just
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Old 2011-07-02, 06:45
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I like the track you pu together a lot. If I could, i would fatten up the kicks and alter the snare. Maybe decorate the piano by adding deeper notes, all in all I like it!!! great work!
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Old 2011-07-02, 15:15
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i appreciate the listen.. I'm still learning a lot as I go
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Old 2011-07-03, 09:24
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again more improvement. The kicks do sound kind of funny almost like you arent playing the full sample.Try playing with panning some of the tracks left or right.
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Old 2011-07-04, 04:58
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thanks for the insight. I'll go have another listen
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Old 2011-07-04, 05:02
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If u have any questions, feel free to hit almost any of us up. We are all learning too. We may be able to help with crazy shit hahahaha (just the crazy shit, not much else loool)
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Old 2011-07-04, 12:34
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Lol.. I hear you on that
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Old 2011-07-04, 16:50
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Nice work but I agree with the piano , lower your notes some so it doesn't sound too much of the same thing over and over .
The drum track I thought was a bit too loud , maybe lower that a bit too . Overall its a good song !

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Old 2011-07-05, 03:11
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Just completed this track last night.. This track is for anyone that has experienced heartache recently. It has a real melancholic feel to it. Have a listen and as usual, constructive feedback is always requested..

S.N- Piano is inspired by Jamie Foxx's song "Extravaganza"

http://soundcloud.com/jfkbeatz/spiri...r-prod-by-just
Good work bro
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Old 2011-07-19, 05:35
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Appreciate the listen and input, thanks. When you refer to the drums, do you mean the kick or the snare or both?
 

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