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Old 2011-07-07, 02:57
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Need some direction on this new song

I could really use some comments, negative and positive, and hopefully creative, to help me work on this new song. It's a new thing for me where I'm considering crafting a commercial rock song. So what should I do with it to take it in that direction? Besides the obvious of get a good singer...

http://soundcloud.com/john-richards/open-up-the-box

Here are the words:

Intrinsic feelings, we've all had before.
Rising to the surface, knocking on your door.
Buried in the backyard, put away.
Like you're saving for, a rainy day.
Open up your heart.
Open up the door.
Open up the box.
Find what you are looking for.

Thanks
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